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Burn my senses alive.
Attack my nose with sulfur.
Kill my lungs as I as I fight not to breath you in,
I'm losing.

Shut my eyes and let out shakes breathes,
I can smell death, and I'm wrapped in an endless sadness.
Cling around me like the night's air.
Take me somewhere else from here.

Cold, endless like space.
No stars explode into super nova here.
Light is not cast upon me, as I am alone here.
But where is here?


Here is the thick smoke, attempt to sufficoate me.
Here is the grim reaper holding out his hand, pulling me into oblivion.
Here is darkness like no other.

We call it...
Written for the prompt:Describe a color without using sight
:iconpowerfulwriting:

Can you guess the color?
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:iconmeerkat14:
meerkat14 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
so... i totally guessed yellow.

and was embarrassingly wrong. but interesting poem!
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Zika-Senji Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It's all good! I'm glad you found it interesting!
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katara11111 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Grey?
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:iconzika-senji:
Zika-Senji Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Close.
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katara11111 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Black?
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DreamAmongStars Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm guessing black

I loved this!
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Zika-Senji Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yup, you guess right! :iconblackheartplz:

I'm glad you love it<3
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HaseficK Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wow this made me even more sad today... (its a compliment)
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Zika-Senji Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I guess?
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HaseficK Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
srry iwas sad so i found this but it made me a good sad like when you watch a chick flick ^^
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